I Am A Poet
 Loss Of Faith ~
Thread started on Tue, 27 May 2008 by AnonyMouse
27 May 2008 15:26:09
AnonyMouse
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14 May 2008
 
Conscious mind leading to awareness - Drifting spirit unanchored soul - Physical Body A prison- A temple of contradiction The temporal holding the eternal - Enlightenment is barbed wire jagged as a heartbeat Smooth as an ocean of thought - Tacky with blood - Coarse with dry salt tears - The remains of belief burned corpses scattered on an alter of self destruction - We sacrifice the genuine to godheads of self awareness - Then hang the gods from trees - Conclusions once attained prove meaningless Convinced in theory that beating somewhere underground is the heart of truth - A fluttering pale butterfly lost in a dead womb - Blind & broken flying on fractured wings - Raw & bleeding waiting to be birthed Innocence & Truth - as unattainable as love - Twice as deadly in intent- Beautiful in its naked ugliness - Brutal & soft as skin - Fragile as paper- Burn it quickly & scatter the ashes Mouse ~Copyright NLP ©2008
 
27 May 2008 17:19:14
Peace
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12 May 2008
 
You seem so tortured in your mind, yet very intelligent and still a christian. I suffer with bipolar and have wrote some dark poems myself. Let your poetry bring you healing. Get out all the ugliness that you soul has suffered. I'm praying for you.
 
27 May 2008 18:37:04
AnonyMouse
Genius Blurter
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14 May 2008
 
This was actually written about People who go on quests for enlightenment.  Most of the time their search leads them to questioning the basis of thier faith and in time can lead to total disillusionment.  People who chase many different religions not sure what they really believe and how they become consumed with a new idea and then Toss it away in favor of another one.  It is my Thoughts on the way so many in society chase themselves in a vain attempt to "find themself".  NO worries.. I am the least tortured person there is.. I know myself well.. And I know exactly what I belive in :)
 
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