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I know it's really dark and i don't want any comments about that but i want to know besides the mood do you like this poem:
Go hide in your bedroom
Somewhere safe and protected
They’ll be here soon
They’re hungry and infected
The Vampires are coming Lots of blood will be shed So you better start running Or you’ll be quite dead
From the fire that burns within their eyes To their fangs that drip with blood
You can see how their desire for death and demise Controls them like a raging flood
For the hope that we had to die warm in bed Will be gone as we die cold and young By poison, blood loss or loss of your head Leaving a soulless corpse on the rope where you hung
We’re gonna be eaten and we all know it So many corpses left for the flies Including this poet
So pack up your life and say your goodbyes
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Aryness |
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Wow am i supposed to be freaked out its very good your a pro that's pretty good
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Aryness |
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well it make some feel pretty scared that is normal right?????
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Peace |
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You're right it is a dark poem; however, I can remember writing some pretty dark poetry myself when I've been in counceling. When the inspiration for a poem comes you just have to stop everything and write it down. Maybe this is the start of some healing in your life. I hope you are okay.
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Luverboy |
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Um,hello?this is the aumo shinrikyo PoEM Riner,luverboy,i beg of your memebers to join my group also.you have talent.
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Hockey4eva |
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Love the poem. Kinda scary!
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That is a dame cool poem well done!
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