What Do You Think Of My Poem?
I'm a girl Who's alone Gone Hurt Praying to be Free from harm In the arms Of Him The one above Confessing my sins One by one Forgive me Teach me Guide me I need your Love Hope Heal me Help me
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I like it, but it is all about whether you like it or not to be honest. There is good and bad criticism out there and if you are happy with all you wrote then that's all that matters.
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Well... It sounds like your talking about god. You should put it on Poetry.com they have contests and plenty of members that will give you feedback if you ask for it. I like it! You can check out my poetry on there if you would like.
Just search Brittany Bigelow most of the results pages are mine besides someone else who has my name crying over the BSB... L.O.L.
Just search Brittany Bigelow most of the results pages are mine besides someone else who has my name crying over the BSB... L.O.L.
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Sounds like we like a lot of the same music and ummm.... I read one of your questions asking if you were ugly...... what were u thinking you are beautiful !
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