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Poem For Valentine's Day?

I am going to write a poem for my boyfriend as a Valentine's Day gift. Can anyone help me? Please be original and quick (I just had the idea), thanks

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    Writing a poem for someone who uniquely touches you and is connected to you is obviously more personal than any poem already written or authored by any of us here.

    Good for you in your idea. When writng your poem, I suggest you steer clear of big sweeping cliches and rather integrate the personal feelings you share so exlcusively.  What moves you and draws you to him?  What is uniquely his to give you?  What does this guy do (for your life and heart) that no one else has or could?

    The words will no doubt need to be your own, but I have to say I have always been struck by this touching account... (my parents recited it to each other after 45 years of marriage):

    It is by "unknown",  (some say Roy Croft--but debateable) in the public domain, and I quote it from memory (SO BLURTIT staff- don't you dare disapprove this):

    Love
    I love you, not only for what you are,
    But for what I am when I am with you.
    I love you, not only for what you have made of yourself, but for what you are making of me.

    I love you for the part of me
    That you bring out;
    I love you for putting your hand into my heaped-up heart
    And passing over all the foolish, weak things
    That you can't help dimly seeing there,
    And for drawing out into the light
    All the beautiful belongings tThat no on else had looked
    quite far enough to find.

    I love you because you are helping me to make of the lumber of my life
    Not a tavern, but a temple;
    Out of the works of my everyday --Not a reproach
    But a song.

    I love you because you have done
    More than any creed could have done
    To make me good --
    And more than any fate could have done
    To make me happy.

    You have done it
    Without a touch,
    Without a word,
    Without a sign.
    You have done it by being yourself.
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    Amore01 

    answered 2 years ago

    wow, amore, that's amazing, thank you so much. I have two hours to memorize it ;) wish me good luck!
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    Lovelyme

    Lovelyme

    commented 2 years ago

    Good luck , my sweet!
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    Amore01

    Amore01

    commented 2 years ago

      Hope this helps:

      Roses are red,
      and Violets are blue,
      Sugar is sweet,
      and So are you!
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      Misshiss20 

      answered 2 years ago

      That's nice one, thanks!
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      Lovelyme

      Lovelyme

      commented 2 years ago

        Try this one and see

        You 're lovable and sweet
        You thrill me every minute
        And sweep me off my feet
        You are charming and disarming
        Desirable and True
        You impress me and inspire me
        That's why I LOVE YOU
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        Beinstein 

        answered 2 years ago

        thanks a lot!
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        Lovelyme

        Lovelyme

        commented 2 years ago

        This is not a poem...but a sentiment from my heart

        If I had to live
        My life all over again...
        I'd find you sooner
        So that I could love you longer
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        Cabrunet 

        answered 2 years ago

        This energy extracted from my brain is your valentines day gift from me.

        Peep game, I love you like a fat kid love cake,
        Naw better yet, like a fat man love steak,
        And its valentines day so take me out on a date,
        And it don't even matter where cuz either way el be great
        you touch my heart at the right time, in a very special way
        Its probably cuz your so fine and you always know what to say
        and listening to you makes my heart melt away.
        (applause)
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        Soronchi 

        answered 2 years ago

          You need not require to take any Valentine gift for me..
          Kiddin....Am sure this story will work.
          This is a cute love story. A guy had a cancer and only a month 2 live. He liked a girl very much,who is working in a CD shop , but he never told her about her love. Everyday he used to go to the CD shop and buy a cd to talk to that girl, After a month he died, When the girl went to the boy house to ask about him, his mother uttered that he's is died and took her to his bedroom;where she saw all her cd, which were unopened and the girl cried. YOU KNOW WHY??

          She had kept chit and love letters in all the cd's. To let him know how much she loves him.....
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          Eimraan 

          answered 2 years ago

          It's a really touching story. but kind sad... communication is always the key... thanks for telling me the story though not a poem
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          Lovelyme

          Lovelyme

          commented 2 years ago

          This is from the 'sport.

          if you,would you



          if you could hear me now
          aying all the things inside
          and not out loud what you would do
          tell me what you would have said
          all the reasons why i love you.
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          Bloodsport 

          answered 2 years ago

          Outlines and hints:
          Give your friend the whole universe and its essance
          and the stream of the river euphrats,
          and the petals of fresh roses and the deffodiles.
          Cary a fair and square friendship for him....
          Be his and truse him....
          Request God to bless him....
          Trust him because he must be trusted....
          Call clouds to shedow him...
          Call breez to fresh him...
          Call cuckoos to sing for him...
          Call peacoks to fresh is eyes...
          Call joys, happinesses and enchants to fall in his lap...
          Be a bed of roses for him...
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          Mohsinali 

          answered 2 years ago

             
             

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