For the sake of winnings lets say It was 3 million. I would estimate that it would loose one half to state and federal taxes right up front..  So with the million five left I would give two of my kids $75.K each up front so wee down to 1.3 million factoring in legal fees.  … Read more

Another example.

(Telling) I walked outside to grab the newspaper and saw a peculiar headline.

(Showing) I cleared the sand from my eyes, yawned and twisted the knob to the front door. It was a brisk and refreshing morning and the twilight of the sunrise gleamed across the freshly frosted grass. I took a deep breath, … Read more

Ex.

Telling- there was a huge awful dragon flying around in the sky. It was scary and mean.

Showing - It swept in from the east, its long sinuous body covered in iridescent blue green scales that glittered and shone like blue fire in the spring sunlight.  Though it wasn't yet terribly close its size … Read more