Wladyslaw Kozicki
Wladyslaw Kozicki voted up Nicole Ashley's answer

Another thing to add: He was drunk last weekend and talked to her for not even a minute because his ride was there. If he didn't have to leave so quickly I'm worried something would have happened between the tw

Wladyslaw Kozicki
Wladyslaw Kozicki voted up Walt O'Reagun's answer

True to a point.

But if it's bad due to incorrect grammar or spelling - that is fact, not opinion.  (Which is often the case of younger, self-published writers)

Wladyslaw Kozicki
Wladyslaw Kozicki voted up Scott Winters' answer

"Why did you ask for my critique if you were only going to ignore it anyway" I asked with a growing hint of annoyance, "You are blinded by your own subjectivity, my friend."