Another thing to add: He was drunk last weekend and talked to her for not even a minute because his ride was there. If he didn't have to leave so quickly I'm worried something would have happened between the tw
True to a point.
But if it's bad due to incorrect grammar or spelling - that is fact, not opinion. (Which is often the case of younger, self-published writers)
"Why did you ask for my critique if you were only going to ignore it anyway" I asked with a growing hint of annoyance, "You are blinded by your own subjectivity, my friend."