Lorna Kelly
Lorna Kelly answered

Thank you :D yes I meant the second one , How about across the ominous darkness of the sky, lightning clashed like broken shards of glass (or something) .I'm not so good with all these literary things since I'm 13 lol but I've been working on a book for a couple of days now.Here's what … Read more

Lorna Kelly
Lorna Kelly thanked Lia Tan's answer

It's not a bad simile because as long as it compares two unlike things using "like" or "as", then you should be fine. However there is a difference (at least in my head) of similes that are worded well and worded poorly. Yours wasn't worded poorly, but I think that it could be better. I'm … Read more