Apoloniusz Borek
Apoloniusz Borek voted up Sudo the Dragon's answer


MI:I am going to tell you why school is not learning

P1: School is not learning because the material is often out dated...

P2: Learning stuff on your own is more rewarding and less stressful and leads to a healthier life...

Conclusion: In the end school is not leaning because you are not taught relevant stuff and leaning … Read more

Apoloniusz Borek
Apoloniusz Borek voted up HappyTwo BeHereTwo's answer

The thesis statement should capture the main idea of your paper, plus it should express your position.  Be careful not to bury it in the middle of your paper.  It's the opening guide for the reader, and it can help you as you write to keep focus.  However, it may be that your thesis statement … Read more